A Salute to Being Vulnerable


A great mentor in my life said, “Run yourself up a flagpole and see who salutes.”

Run her up


That’s energy and power, huh? I need to be who I am and not worry about pleasing others so much. And it works great as long as people do salute. When they mutter and close down and turn away, I want to strip that flag from the pole, stuff it under my shirt, and pretend it never happened.

Being Vulnerable

It’s such a cliche, that nightmare where you’re naked and people you thought were your friends throw rocks at you. But I know that nightmare so well it sits in my gut like one of the rocks, shreds of my skin still clinging to it.


So, I hide away. I wrap myself up in masks and armor — anything so that if people don’t seem to approve, I can think, “It’s not the real me they don’t like. They don’t know the real me.”

I’m not alone. Most people wear masks — symbolic, of course, but powerful nonetheless.

Masks distance us from hurt, but also from closeness.  It is only when we see a person’s vulnerability that we care about them.  “Oh,” we think, “you’re human too!”

To reach people through my writing I need to be vulnerable. I need to open my heart and let people in so they can see how it beats. I cannot afford to protect myself.


Of course I want people to care about me as a person. And as a writer, I want readers to care about my characters. Which means THEY have to be vulnerable.

I’m not saying this right. We’re all vulnerable.  Everything is vulnerable.  The fierce dragon whose scales under the tongue are softer than the others, the building whose ventilation system is big enough to allow a small child to crawl through, the big, tough CEO whose young daughter has just announced she’s going off to live with her mother instead of him.

The issue, then, is not making ourselves vulnerable so much as admitting our vulnerability.  Our characters don’t have to embrace this aspect of themselves. We writers, we creators, must.

How do we embrace vulnerability?

  • We show the underbelly. Maybe it’s yucky. It’s probably darned embarrassing. And the risks are real.

Showing vulnerability is not  the same thing as pointing an arrow at yourself and declaring to the world, “Look at me! I’m such a loser!! Don’t you feel sorry for me?” But it may look like that if we’re not careful.

  • We also have to preen those peacock feathers.

We must share the feelings of success: so proud and touchy, so scared of being scorned, so gloriously happy and embarrassed that maybe no one else thinks this is a big deal.  Hard, hard stuff.

It’s not the same thing as pointing an arrow at yourself and saying, “Aren’t I great? Don’t you wish  you were me?” Pah-lease. But again, it can look like that.

I’m not so good at all this vulnerability stuff. I’m working on it. For such a show-offy kind of gal, you’d think I wouldn’t have so much trouble putting myself out there for the world to see, but I do.


Can you see this? My short story, “Moving On,”  won 7th place in the Children’s/ Young Adult Fiction division for the Writers Digest 80th Short Story Contest last fall. Have I even put this big deal in my life on this blog? NO!  Why not?

Maybe it feels like bragging. Maybe I was afraid of making a bigger deal of it than it deserves. Maybe I just don’t know how to open up and share my total delight that such a thing happened to me. To me! An award! I’ve never won an award before. Is that pathetic?

And really, who cares if it is?

It’s me.

I am my successes and my insecurities.  The ugly belly and the peacock feathers, wild and wonderful.

And so are we all. And so are our characters. Raise ’em up on that flagpole! Salute!! And then maybe we can treat ourselves as proudly as we do our creations.

This is a good space to brag, if not about yourself, then about your characters. How do they make you proud of them?



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8 Responses to A Salute to Being Vulnerable

  1. Judy Enderle says:

    I totally love this post, Mattie. And I got here via Twitter. Thanks for reminding me that you are blogging.

    Hang on to that flagpole. I salute you!


    • Mathilda says:

      How exciting about the twitter! I know I need a lesson on that from you Judy. Maybe I’m stepping (cautiously) into the 21st century. Thank you so much for your support!

  2. I’m saluting, you contest winning girl you. And the contest entering girl, prize or not! Thanks for sharing that thing about the soft place under the dragon’s tongue — it might come in useful. Here’s a thing to wonder about — do you have an underbelly if you’re standing up straight?

    • Mathilda says:

      Alas, the underbelly is always there –and cannot even be protected (though disguised) by spandex! Of course standing tall is very HEALTHY, and quite necessary when strutting the full plumage.

  3. Spandex, LOL. Really Mathilda, do you wear spandex? Is it multicolored? Sheesh.

  4. I love this post! You are so right about vulnerability, but YIKES(!) it is so scary — I’m still working on that one.

    • Mathilda says:

      Yeah, and the kicker is that recognizing the fear doesn’t diminish it. No fair! I guess the answer is to breathe deeply, bow, honor the fear, and say, “yes, but I’m doing this anyway.” (Do you think my yoga practice is finally impacting me?)

  5. Amen, amen, amen Mattie. So so true. I simply love your honest way of writing.
    Have you checked out Brene Brown’s TED talks on vulnerability? They will rock you.
    Dang proud to say I know you and your beautiful feathers!

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